This is the first thing I have written in a while as I attempt to balance my literary and culinary creativity. Along with trying to start my own small business selling hot sauces, pepper jams, dry rubs, and whatever else my mind comes up.
However the particular theme of this challenge was irresistible. Especially given my love of older black and white horror movies. Taking inspiration from the brilliant and frightening portrayal done by Lon Chaney, in the 1925 adaption of the stage play. His performance reveals the tormented, and fractured persona of the phantom. A man who attempts to cope with who he was and who he is becoming. That was a large influence on how I wrote this rather brief poem. Along with taking some more personal understanding of how life sometimes creates divides, and shapes us.
Phantoms are representative of the past.
They are born of our mistakes and growths alike.
Each one acts as a lesson we have learned from experience.
Regardless of if that education was positive or negative.
Eventually the phantoms of our lives gather about on the grand stage known as life.
All of a minor manifestation of who we once were.
Another living and expanding the present.
The one of future selves lurking hidden amongst the shadows.
In a way, each person is forged of metaphysical phantoms.
Along with scars brought about by living.
In a way, we are all phantoms casked in senew, flesh, and bone.
Critique level: Comment. Word count: 106
It’s so nice to see you posting once again with the WEP community. You were missed. I love that the prompt inspired you to write a poem. Well done, something to truly ponder. I agree, and empathize with your words.
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Thanks Yolanda. I’m thrilled you agreed and my poem made you think.
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In a way we are all phantoms …
Couldn’t be more true. So true that we are each shaped by our own different exepriences and each person is made up of our own metaphysical phantoms.
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Thanks Sonia.
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I love the imagery here and can feel the phantoms of our mistakes and triumphs surrounding me. Nicely done!
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Thanks Jami. I’m pleased to hear that
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What a beautiful interpretation of the prompt!
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Thanks
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Sometimes life crowds in on us, as if we were ourselves phantoms striving for balance between commitment and creativity. Thank you for writing this poem that says much in few words. Lovely.
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You’re welcome Beth. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Welcome back. I love that final line in particular. So true. So very true.
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Thanks. Indeed.
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Hi,
An interesting view of life, but I haven’t made up my mind about whether I’m a phantom.
Shalom shalom
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Hey Pat. Thanks.
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Hello Christopher, welcome back, if only for this prompt. Your culinary adventures sound interesting. Loved your treatment of ‘phantom’. An excellent way to put it.
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Hello Denise,thanks. It I definitely interesting, I just I understood why it’s so instinctual. Thanks Denise.
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Hi Christopher – good luck with the culinary progression … wishing you well. You’re so right we are phantoms of ourselves … I drop back to times past and then decide to forget!! I’m here and full of beans at the moment – so life goes on – I’ll be a phantom in due time. An interesting take on WEP – good to have another perspective – cheers Hilary
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Hi Hillary. Thanks Hillary, I’m pleased you found my take interesting.
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I really enjoyed the poem, Christopher! It made me reflect on myself, and the idea of my past experiences each being a little phantom on its own is so interesting. Thank you for sharing your take on the prompt — wishing you all the best with your business!
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Thanks, Damyanti. I’m pleased you enjoyed it
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So true! We are all phantoms of our pasts, our journey through life that has shaped us into what we are . But, it also makes me wonder, are we really who we think we are?
Your poetry made me think about who and where I am today, and how my life has changed me as a person.
Thank you for your words, Christopher!
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You’re welcome, Shilpa. It is indeed true that life has an odd way of shaping a person.
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Great poem. It resonates.
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Thanks Olga.
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I’m so glad to see you posting for WEP again. And always glad to see a poetry post, thank you! A very creative take on the prompt. Loved the last line – totally relatable.
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Thanks, Nilanjana. I try, I usually don’t write poetry, but I struggled to get this out of my head.
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Very philosophical poem. I couldn’t agree with you more, especially the last line
‘In a way, we are all phantoms casked in senew, flesh, and bone’ so true.
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Thanks Kalpana, a little more philosophical then I expected but it contains a great degree of truth
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Beautiful write friend
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Thanks MsHazyBrain.
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